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Nine mengatakan...
When I was the new (a new) student of SMA 1 Salatiga, there was an event called Marsinal Pra osma. The aim of this event is to introduce the juniors with the seniors. On my first day of MPO, I did mistake. So my senior, Sari, punished me. (I made mistake on my first day of MPO, so my senior Sari punished me) She asked me to find her friend, Bagus and asked him what color of his underwear. Gosh! Should I do that?
Yes, of course.
I haven't known ( I didn’t know )him before. So I started by asking my seniors one by one. Finally, I found him.
Here is (below are) my conversation with him : (in Indonesian)
me :” Mas yang namanya Bagus XII IA 2 ya?”
Bagus :” Iya. Napa?”
me :” warna celana dalemmu sekarang apa mas?”
Bagus :”@!#??%*”

Well, after having 10 minute embarrasing conversation I knew what color of his underwear is... RED! (I finally found that the color of his underwear was red)

“Well, you’re lucky, because Bagus didn’t ask you back about the size of your pants”
2009 Maret 11 06:40



nine mengatakan...
one (One) day my relatives and I went to a cinema in Semarang to watch a movie. After the movie was over, I throw (thrown) my coke can behind (,) without knowing whether there were people behind me (or not). Then, a girl was angry with me because my can hit her and made her clothes wet.

“If I were that girl, I won’t get angry. I just asked you to buy me a new expensive cloth”
2009 Maret 12 01:53


Nine mengatakan...
What is in your mind when you hear "blue film"? when I first heard these words, (when the first time I heard those words) what is in my mind is just (the thing that came on my mind was ) a film with a blue screen. But of course, blue film is not just a blue screen film.
OK, honestly I have never watched a blue film until I was 17 years old. One day, my teacher was coming (came) late to the class. I was sitting at my desk, when one of my friends came and entrusted his mobile phone to me. I opened his mobile phone and I didn't know how, suddenly a porn video appeared on the screen. I was shocked but still continuing watch (to watch) that video. Soon after that, I felt dizzy and I run ( ran) to the toilet, spilled my lunch out.

“Wow… I’m wondering ….errr..hahahaha… nevermind!!
2009 Maret 12 02:00


atoenoe mengatakan...
It was Friday when I found that (a) little cat in (at the) the front of my door. Actually, I didn’t like cat at all (,) but I brought (decided to bring ) it into my house. (Then) I fed it and gave it milk. It kooked (looked) so nice and I started to fall in love with it. Finally, I decided to keep the cat as my first pet.

Eew…That sweet….how’s about an open mouthed crocodile which is laying at the front of your door?
2009 Maret 12 22:37

Atoenoe mengatakan...
When I met him for the first time (when the first time I met him), (soon)I knew it was a big mistake. He entered my class in hurry. He sat down beside me. ( He was sitting next to me, soon after entered the class) He said hello and gave his best smile. But everything was ended when the lecture said, “ Hey, you! Girl in white T-shirt. Please do number one in front of the class.” I was so embarassed. Phew!

Why you felt embarrassed? That was the right time to prove your brain….go keep fighting Tiger…
2009 Maret 12 22:38

atoenoe mengatakan...
That was my MPO ( Marginal Pra Osma) (,) an old welcoming party in my high school. I had to wear many kinds of attribute thet (that)made me look (looked) like a fool. I had to get some signatures from teachers and body student’s committee. I did many things like counting roofs, finding ants, makindg (making) a poem, and proposing a senior student to be my boyfriend. And that was unforgetablr (unforgettable) moment for me. Huf!

HAHAHA…I agree with you… it was a great time to look a new boyfriend/ girlfriend indeed…
2009 Maret 12 22:40

blessme_deby mengatakan...
I have (had) an embarrassing experience when I was in Senior High School. After I had my lunch in canteen , I went back to my class. I was in a rush ( , )so I didn't realize when I got into (entered to) the wrong class. Everybody laughed (was laughing) at me.

“How come? If I were the teacher I’ll kick you out out of the window right away!!”
2009 Maret 12 22:47


blessme_deby mengatakan...
After I finished my class, I went to Mandiri ATM in front of campus. In front of the ATM there was a small clothing shop. I was looking (stared) at that shop without looking (at )my way. as (As) the result, I hit a glass door.

“Debby…you’d better walk carefully next time ….”
2009 Maret 12 22:49


lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was in Junior High School, I hated one of the teacher (teachers) so much. she (She) was very strict and her thin body made her appearance looked even odd. a lot (Lots) of students in my school hated her too. so, (So,) it wasn't a surprise if sometime (sometimes) we heard every student would talk (talked) about her if the subject was "the most cruel teacher".
One day, I was gossipping about her with my classmate in the class after break. We were talking loudly and sometime we were laughing because of the jokes about my teacher. I was talking too and I was the last one who would have chance to spoke about that teacher in class that day... (wordiness) (We were talking loudly and sometimes laughing, because of those jokes about my teacher. I was the last one who would have chance to spoke about that teacher in class that day...)
I said, "I swear. She’s going to the hell for her stupid bones." (what does ‘stupid bones’ mean?)
Then I talked loudly and confidently about her other bad sides (negative sides). I just felt strange because my friends around me just looked at me with their confused and afraid (anxious and frightened) faces without giving responses (any reaction )to my words.
Suddenly, someone behind me pull (pulled) my ear and said coldly, "what are you talking about?"
I was freezing when I realized that it was the voice of my "cruel teacher" (my cruel teacher’s voice )who (whom) was I talked about.
So, (after) that day I spent the rest of (the) my school time in the teacher's office to get my "cruel" punishment. (What kinds of punishment ?)

“I’m sure you’ll be miss that cruel teacher”
2009 Maret 13 05:42


blessme_deby mengatakan...
I was playing with my sister when my dog, Asta bite (bitted) me. painful , (Painful) that(was) what I felt. moreover (Moreover)I should go home with a hole on my pants.( , ) but that (incidence) didn't make me traumatic.

What kind of dog is it?
2009 Maret 14 03:27


Nine mengatakan...
Last week, my father and I went to my father’s friend to give invitation card. My father forgot where the house was because my father ( he) rarely came to his house. With my father (my father’s) instinct, we came to a house. I knocked (I was knocking) on the door but nobody came out. So I decided to slip the invitation card under the door. Then, when my father and I wanted (decided) to go home, my father’s friend came out from (of) his house, which is contiguous with the house that I slip the card into.

“LOL…this I called funny….fluky you.. the house owner didn’t assume you as a debt collector!!”
2009 Maret 17 18:54


nine mengatakan...
When I was typing my paper last Saturday night, there was a sound of my favorite “dog-dog” noodle. I run out (ran) outside to call Mr. Gozali (the name of “dog-dog” noodle seller).
Unfortunately, there was another boy who also wanted to buy the noodle. We argued a little about who called Mr. Gozali first. Finally, I was so lucky that because Mr. Gozali cooked me the noodle first. (Mr. Gozali served up me first)

“How much does mie dog2 cost? You’d Better to treat me sometimes…”
2009 Maret 19 05:06


Nine mengatakan...
It was my first punishment that I got when I was in Junior high school. Because my friends and I were bored with the lesson that my teacher taught, we cut from class by climbing the school wall when the teacher hadn’t come yet. (Bored, me and my friends were settling to skip the class by climbing the school wall when my teacher hadn’t come yet). The next day, my friends and I (me and ny friends) were gathered at schoolyard to yank out weeds growing on the yard.
“Wow…galz!!! You are the truly Rambo….”

Well….uhm….there so many weeds growing thickly over my house …wanna yank them out??
2009 Maret 19 05:07


lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was child, I often heard about the story of falling star. They (they) said that falling star could make people's dreams come true. Of course I believe (believed) that ( , ) although I'd never see that falling star itself. Then, when I was about 14 years old, I had a gathering with my friends that (and) we shall having (had to) sleep outdoor. We were talking (talked) about many things and joking (joked) along that night. At 3 am, some of my friends have (had) fallen asleep and some of (the rest of )us were still chatting. Because of feeling tired (tired), I was lying beside my friends and facing the dark sky. That was a great starry night. I was just staring at the stars and I was almost falling (almost fell) asleep when suddenly I saw a falling star! Spontaneously, I shouted to my friends who were still cahatting (chatting), "Hey! Falling star!" Then my friend told me that I shall make a wish at that time and so I did. After that, I couldn't sleep until 6am, because I was amazed by 3 beautiful falling stars that I would (will) never forget. The blue star, Orange star, and Bright star..

“Does your wish come true?”
2009 Maret 19 05:15


blessme_deby mengatakan...
I can’t forget this incident. When I was a child ( , )I like playing on the porch. One day, I was squeezed between fences. I got stuck for about 2 hours until my parent came (out ) from their office and set me free from (between) fences.

“Debby…what would happen if yours parent didn’t show up ….”
2009 Maret 19 18:30


blessme_deby mengatakan...
My friends and I like (liked to) squatting (hang out) in mall. After (I) we finished eating, I wanted to pay the bill. Unfortunately, I couldn’t find my wallet. I was (became) a victim of pick pocketing!

“Are you familiar with a small things called credit card?”
2009 Maret 19 18:30


blessme_deby mengatakan...
Yesterday, I accompanied my brother and his friends from Bali who wanted to hunt places for their photograph. At 4 a.m ( , ) we went to Rawa Pening to catch the sunrise. The sunrise was so wonderful! I bet that you will adore the sunrise at Rawa Pening.

“What a good job to promote our local tourist resort” “ whoahh..you’re truly nature lover”
Next destination…..”kopeng”..hehehe
2009 Maret 19 18:31


atoenoe mengatakan...
my boyfriend and I were going to find a quite place for cooling down our mind. We found a place which has a lot of rubber trees beside the town. (Me and my boyfriend were going to find a quite place for cooling down our mind when we finally found a place which has a lot of rubber trees beside the town) We sat there and started to talk about small stuff (things) there. I asked him to carry me on his back for a walk because I enjoyed lying on his back much. We stayed there for about 3 hours then he took me back home.

Hohohoho…..passionate hours, huh!
2009 Maret 19 19:07


atoenoe mengatakan...
I was very sad last week because of my bad grade of Syntax. (having bad score on syntax) I just got 66 on my first test. But I have to had to admit that I (I) didn't study hard before the test.

“That’s okay….66 isn’t that bad…I got 52 on my first test! “
2009 Maret 19 19:09


atoenoe mengatakan...
He was not a handsome guy but he (omit ‘he’) quite nice to everyone. He has (was) kind to anybody who needed his help. but (Except) one thing that I hated most of this man (that) he never do (did) his promises to me.

“Try to find other guys…Me… maybe?? Hahaha..”
2009 Maret 19 19:11


lois_kp mengatakan...
Last month, I went to a cafe to have a lunch. I chose (was choosing) one of the menu without looking (looked) at the price. I was surprise when the food came. It was a big portion for at least 3 people! I felt shock (was shocked) and looked at the menu, I found that the price of the food (that) I was asking for was too ( so) expensive for one portion ordinary food like that. Finally, I asked my friends to eat that (the) food with me.

“At least, you didn’t entrust your identity card (KTP) “
2009 Maret 22 20:40


lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was child, I had a bicycle which I loved so much. I went around with my friends with it. One day, I was careless that (so) a motorbike hit me. I fell down and injured. However, I felt so strong after that, because although I had injuries, I didn't cry ( , ) and so my family's doctor told me that I would (will) be a strong girl. Haha.

“Strong like a tiger …I loved it...”
2009 Maret 22 20:40


lois_kp mengatakan...
I've got my lovely celular stolen in some days before Eid Mubarak. ( I lost my lovely cellular several days before Eid Mubarak) I just didn't realize when the thieves stole it. They was getting closer to me and picked my cellular from my pocket. They must try to get close to me in order to pick my cellular out of my wallet) After that, I just felt confused because I (had) saved all of my agenda in my cellular. For some days, I forgot almost all of my appointments and my schedule!
“Wrap your phones using newspaper! The pick pocket won’t be aware since they considered it as tempe… hahaha.”

-Believed me..it works-
2009 Maret 22 20:42