atoenoe mengatakan...
It was 11 p.m. I couldn't sleep that night, so I sent sms to my boyfriend. We discussed everything about our relationship but we came to the main point. He left me. He decided to leave me and asked me to forget everything. I said nothing. I felt asleep. In the morning, I read the messages again. I thought hardly (I still could’t believe it) and then I cried all the morning.
Ewwww…sad story part 1..
2009 Maret 25 05:22
atoenoe mengatakan...
He didn't reply my message eventhough I tried it many times. I missed him very much. But it was impossible to meet him. He didn't want to hurt me anymore by stopping contact me. I can't (couldn’t) believe it.
Ewwww…sad story part 2…
2009 Maret 25 05:24
atoenoe mengatakan...
"I knocked (at) your door but there was no answer. I called your mobile phone, there was no answer too. I sent you sms, you didn't reply it. Then, I decided to not (decided not to ) disturb you anymore. I love you. Goodbye."
Again… sad story part 3…
..so hurt so much pain….
2009 Maret 25 05:30
nine mengatakan...
When I went to ATM last week, I shocked ( I was shock) because I found that my balance was still in the same amount as last month. There must have been some amount of money came into my account because of a business that I ran. I asked my niece, who had a business with me, about the money. She told me that she had transferred the money to my account, but when I printed out my account at Mandiri Bank, there was no a transfer from any bank. I asked her, but she answered nothing. I waited (I’d been waiting) for her confirm to me, but until yesterday she didn’t come to my house or (nor) even called me. I was really disappointed at her. Not for the money (not because of the money) , but for my trust of her that she misused.
Try find a lawyer… you have to sue her/him!!!
2009 Maret 26 05:25
nine mengatakan...
I couldn’t sleep at that night. (so)I went to living room to watch TV. I turned on the TV and searched for a good movie. I watched Trans TV and found a horror movie so I changed to another channel. I watched RCTI, but still found a horror movie. Then, I watched ANTV and still, found a horror movie. I decided to go back to my room to turn on my computer, but when I stood up to went (go) back to my room, the electricity went out. Then I realized that it (day) was “Malam Jumat Kliwon.”
Hohoho…don’t be a coward!!
2009 Maret 26 05:27
nine mengatakan...
I was 10 years old when I walked from SD Laboratorium Salatiga to my house at Dliko Indah Street at that day. It was sunny day, and I should ( I had to) walk alone because my father didn’t pick me up and I ran out for (of) money. After I arrived at my house, I was so unlucky because my parents and my sister hadn’t come yet and I didn’t bring a key. Finally, after waited for an hour, my parents came and saved me from dehydration.
Yeah… same story also happened to me.
2009 Maret 26 05:29
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I was so panic (I was panic) that day. I couldn’t find my self-phone everywhere (anywhere); in my pocket, my bag, or even Innes’ bag. (so) I ran to Rindang where I last went there. Thanks God, I found my self-phone. Carelessly, I left out my self-phone there.
Well…I don’t surprised!! Hahahahaha
Sanguine people always do this!!
2009 Maret 26 05:37
blessme_deby mengatakan...
It was 11p.m (22 p.m.). when I arrived at Lawang Sewu Semarang. After hunting for photography, my brother, his friends and I decided to go to Lawang Sewu. They came from Bali, so they were curious about Lawang Sewu. I was the only girl at that time. Actually I saw nothing spooky, my brother and his friends also didn’t catch any oddity on their camera, but some man from IBL, who also joined with our team, was being followed by a girl, who “lives” in Lawang Sewu.
Hmm…..maybe she wants signature!!
2009 Maret 26 05:38
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I had a prom night in Puncak with my friends in SMA Marsudirirni Bekasi. I came late at that time because my friends asked me to put make up on them. But, surprisingly, I became Queen for the prom night with my boyfriend, Kadek, as the King.
Yadaa…wkwkwkwk
2009 Maret 26 05:40
lois_kp mengatakan...
When my youngest brother was in elementary school, my mother picked him up everyday after school. One day, my mother was away, so my brother called pedicab ( pedicab’ driver) to go home. After they arrived in front of my house, my brother came in to our house immediately. Then, he ate( he had lunch) and went to bed. Some hours after that, there was a knock on my house’s front door. So I went out to see who was knocking the door. I felt surprised when I knew who was in front of the door. That was the pedicab’ driver! He said that my brother didn’t pay him yet and had been waiting for hours. Finally, I apologized to him and paid him.
Hahaha…how poor is he.. I granted lots sympathy for his passionate.
2009 Maret 28 04:59
lois_kp mengatakan...
I love chocolate so much! My friends knew that and when I celebrated my 15th birthday, they gave me a box full of my favorite chocolate bars (a full box of my favorites chocolate). They challenged me to eat all of those 12 chocolate bars in 30 minutes. If I could do that, they promised me to buy me free chocolates for one month. So I did! My friends were amazed and then laughed. Although I vomited after some minutes because of those chocolates, they kept their promise and bought me a lot of chocolate bars for one month.
mmm…Yummy…..tummy….fatty…wkwkwk
2009 Maret 28 05:00
lois_kp mengatakan...
Last Saturday, I visited Andre, my friend ( I visited my friend, Andre) in Solo with my brother. Before we went in to Andre’s house, my brother and I sat on infield ( what does it mean? A field?) ) in front of Andre’s house. My brother put his cell-phone on it beside us. Then, we came in to the house, had dinner, played games, and talked about many things for hours. Suddenly, my brother said that he couldn’t find his cell-phone. We were confused and looked for his cell-phone around the house. Finally, he got out and found it on infield! We were so grateful because none found and stole it!
Again!! Cell phones became a popular topic to post!!
2009 Maret 28 05:02
lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was in senior high school, I often skipped the class with my classmates. Like one day when I skipped Math’ class and went to canteen with my 9 classmates. Suddenly, we met with the strictest teacher in the canteen. Furiously, he commanded (asked) us to go back to our class. Then we went away from the canteen but of course we didn’t go back to the class! We watched the basketball match, ate in the food court, and we really had a good time. Because of that, all of us got into trouble with the headmaster and we shall make a “surat pernyataan” which our parents must sign it (which had to be sign by our parents). That was so silly, but we were really enjoyed the “skip-class” part. Of course that (those) punishment didn’t make us stopped (to stop) skipping the class!
Such disobedient students!! Yet, you have a story to remember.
2009 Maret 28 05:03
lois_kp mengatakan...
Last year, I was shopping in a mall with my friend (this is not a sentences). Then we came in to an accessories’ Stan (store). There were a lot of cute dolls here. I stared at one of the cutest doll. There was a button in the middle of its stomach-part. Because of my curiosity, I pushed it. Then suddenly there were noisy sounds from the doll. Everybody looked at me and the doll because the Stan (store) was crowd of customer but they were very quiet and didn’t make noisy sound. I was very ashamed, so I walked to the other part of the shop and pretended as if I had never touched the doll.
LOL….hahahaha... this is really hilarious!! Truly I loved it
2009 Maret 28 05:04
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Nine mengatakan...
When I was the new (a new) student of SMA 1 Salatiga, there was an event called Marsinal Pra osma. The aim of this event is to introduce the juniors with the seniors. On my first day of MPO, I did mistake. So my senior, Sari, punished me. (I made mistake on my first day of MPO, so my senior Sari punished me) She asked me to find her friend, Bagus and asked him what color of his underwear. Gosh! Should I do that?
Yes, of course.
I haven't known ( I didn’t know )him before. So I started by asking my seniors one by one. Finally, I found him.
Here is (below are) my conversation with him : (in Indonesian)
me :” Mas yang namanya Bagus XII IA 2 ya?”
Bagus :” Iya. Napa?”
me :” warna celana dalemmu sekarang apa mas?”
Bagus :”@!#??%*”
Well, after having 10 minute embarrasing conversation I knew what color of his underwear is... RED! (I finally found that the color of his underwear was red)
“Well, you’re lucky, because Bagus didn’t ask you back about the size of your pants”
2009 Maret 11 06:40
nine mengatakan...
one (One) day my relatives and I went to a cinema in Semarang to watch a movie. After the movie was over, I throw (thrown) my coke can behind (,) without knowing whether there were people behind me (or not). Then, a girl was angry with me because my can hit her and made her clothes wet.
“If I were that girl, I won’t get angry. I just asked you to buy me a new expensive cloth”
2009 Maret 12 01:53
Nine mengatakan...
What is in your mind when you hear "blue film"? when I first heard these words, (when the first time I heard those words) what is in my mind is just (the thing that came on my mind was ) a film with a blue screen. But of course, blue film is not just a blue screen film.
OK, honestly I have never watched a blue film until I was 17 years old. One day, my teacher was coming (came) late to the class. I was sitting at my desk, when one of my friends came and entrusted his mobile phone to me. I opened his mobile phone and I didn't know how, suddenly a porn video appeared on the screen. I was shocked but still continuing watch (to watch) that video. Soon after that, I felt dizzy and I run ( ran) to the toilet, spilled my lunch out.
“Wow… I’m wondering ….errr..hahahaha… nevermind!!
2009 Maret 12 02:00
atoenoe mengatakan...
It was Friday when I found that (a) little cat in (at the) the front of my door. Actually, I didn’t like cat at all (,) but I brought (decided to bring ) it into my house. (Then) I fed it and gave it milk. It kooked (looked) so nice and I started to fall in love with it. Finally, I decided to keep the cat as my first pet.
Eew…That sweet….how’s about an open mouthed crocodile which is laying at the front of your door?
2009 Maret 12 22:37
Atoenoe mengatakan...
When I met him for the first time (when the first time I met him), (soon)I knew it was a big mistake. He entered my class in hurry. He sat down beside me. ( He was sitting next to me, soon after entered the class) He said hello and gave his best smile. But everything was ended when the lecture said, “ Hey, you! Girl in white T-shirt. Please do number one in front of the class.” I was so embarassed. Phew!
Why you felt embarrassed? That was the right time to prove your brain….go keep fighting Tiger…
2009 Maret 12 22:38
atoenoe mengatakan...
That was my MPO ( Marginal Pra Osma) (,) an old welcoming party in my high school. I had to wear many kinds of attribute thet (that)made me look (looked) like a fool. I had to get some signatures from teachers and body student’s committee. I did many things like counting roofs, finding ants, makindg (making) a poem, and proposing a senior student to be my boyfriend. And that was unforgetablr (unforgettable) moment for me. Huf!
HAHAHA…I agree with you… it was a great time to look a new boyfriend/ girlfriend indeed…
2009 Maret 12 22:40
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I have (had) an embarrassing experience when I was in Senior High School. After I had my lunch in canteen , I went back to my class. I was in a rush ( , )so I didn't realize when I got into (entered to) the wrong class. Everybody laughed (was laughing) at me.
“How come? If I were the teacher I’ll kick you out out of the window right away!!”
2009 Maret 12 22:47
blessme_deby mengatakan...
After I finished my class, I went to Mandiri ATM in front of campus. In front of the ATM there was a small clothing shop. I was looking (stared) at that shop without looking (at )my way. as (As) the result, I hit a glass door.
“Debby…you’d better walk carefully next time ….”
2009 Maret 12 22:49
lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was in Junior High School, I hated one of the teacher (teachers) so much. she (She) was very strict and her thin body made her appearance looked even odd. a lot (Lots) of students in my school hated her too. so, (So,) it wasn't a surprise if sometime (sometimes) we heard every student would talk (talked) about her if the subject was "the most cruel teacher".
One day, I was gossipping about her with my classmate in the class after break. We were talking loudly and sometime we were laughing because of the jokes about my teacher. I was talking too and I was the last one who would have chance to spoke about that teacher in class that day... (wordiness) (We were talking loudly and sometimes laughing, because of those jokes about my teacher. I was the last one who would have chance to spoke about that teacher in class that day...)
I said, "I swear. She’s going to the hell for her stupid bones." (what does ‘stupid bones’ mean?)
Then I talked loudly and confidently about her other bad sides (negative sides). I just felt strange because my friends around me just looked at me with their confused and afraid (anxious and frightened) faces without giving responses (any reaction )to my words.
Suddenly, someone behind me pull (pulled) my ear and said coldly, "what are you talking about?"
I was freezing when I realized that it was the voice of my "cruel teacher" (my cruel teacher’s voice )who (whom) was I talked about.
So, (after) that day I spent the rest of (the) my school time in the teacher's office to get my "cruel" punishment. (What kinds of punishment ?)
“I’m sure you’ll be miss that cruel teacher”
2009 Maret 13 05:42
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I was playing with my sister when my dog, Asta bite (bitted) me. painful , (Painful) that(was) what I felt. moreover (Moreover)I should go home with a hole on my pants.( , ) but that (incidence) didn't make me traumatic.
What kind of dog is it?
2009 Maret 14 03:27
Nine mengatakan...
Last week, my father and I went to my father’s friend to give invitation card. My father forgot where the house was because my father ( he) rarely came to his house. With my father (my father’s) instinct, we came to a house. I knocked (I was knocking) on the door but nobody came out. So I decided to slip the invitation card under the door. Then, when my father and I wanted (decided) to go home, my father’s friend came out from (of) his house, which is contiguous with the house that I slip the card into.
“LOL…this I called funny….fluky you.. the house owner didn’t assume you as a debt collector!!”
2009 Maret 17 18:54
nine mengatakan...
When I was typing my paper last Saturday night, there was a sound of my favorite “dog-dog” noodle. I run out (ran) outside to call Mr. Gozali (the name of “dog-dog” noodle seller).
Unfortunately, there was another boy who also wanted to buy the noodle. We argued a little about who called Mr. Gozali first. Finally, I was so lucky that because Mr. Gozali cooked me the noodle first. (Mr. Gozali served up me first)
“How much does mie dog2 cost? You’d Better to treat me sometimes…”
2009 Maret 19 05:06
Nine mengatakan...
It was my first punishment that I got when I was in Junior high school. Because my friends and I were bored with the lesson that my teacher taught, we cut from class by climbing the school wall when the teacher hadn’t come yet. (Bored, me and my friends were settling to skip the class by climbing the school wall when my teacher hadn’t come yet). The next day, my friends and I (me and ny friends) were gathered at schoolyard to yank out weeds growing on the yard.
“Wow…galz!!! You are the truly Rambo….”
Well….uhm….there so many weeds growing thickly over my house …wanna yank them out??
2009 Maret 19 05:07
lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was child, I often heard about the story of falling star. They (they) said that falling star could make people's dreams come true. Of course I believe (believed) that ( , ) although I'd never see that falling star itself. Then, when I was about 14 years old, I had a gathering with my friends that (and) we shall having (had to) sleep outdoor. We were talking (talked) about many things and joking (joked) along that night. At 3 am, some of my friends have (had) fallen asleep and some of (the rest of )us were still chatting. Because of feeling tired (tired), I was lying beside my friends and facing the dark sky. That was a great starry night. I was just staring at the stars and I was almost falling (almost fell) asleep when suddenly I saw a falling star! Spontaneously, I shouted to my friends who were still cahatting (chatting), "Hey! Falling star!" Then my friend told me that I shall make a wish at that time and so I did. After that, I couldn't sleep until 6am, because I was amazed by 3 beautiful falling stars that I would (will) never forget. The blue star, Orange star, and Bright star..
“Does your wish come true?”
2009 Maret 19 05:15
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I can’t forget this incident. When I was a child ( , )I like playing on the porch. One day, I was squeezed between fences. I got stuck for about 2 hours until my parent came (out ) from their office and set me free from (between) fences.
“Debby…what would happen if yours parent didn’t show up ….”
2009 Maret 19 18:30
blessme_deby mengatakan...
My friends and I like (liked to) squatting (hang out) in mall. After (I) we finished eating, I wanted to pay the bill. Unfortunately, I couldn’t find my wallet. I was (became) a victim of pick pocketing!
“Are you familiar with a small things called credit card?”
2009 Maret 19 18:30
blessme_deby mengatakan...
Yesterday, I accompanied my brother and his friends from Bali who wanted to hunt places for their photograph. At 4 a.m ( , ) we went to Rawa Pening to catch the sunrise. The sunrise was so wonderful! I bet that you will adore the sunrise at Rawa Pening.
“What a good job to promote our local tourist resort” “ whoahh..you’re truly nature lover”
Next destination…..”kopeng”..hehehe
2009 Maret 19 18:31
atoenoe mengatakan...
my boyfriend and I were going to find a quite place for cooling down our mind. We found a place which has a lot of rubber trees beside the town. (Me and my boyfriend were going to find a quite place for cooling down our mind when we finally found a place which has a lot of rubber trees beside the town) We sat there and started to talk about small stuff (things) there. I asked him to carry me on his back for a walk because I enjoyed lying on his back much. We stayed there for about 3 hours then he took me back home.
Hohohoho…..passionate hours, huh!
2009 Maret 19 19:07
atoenoe mengatakan...
I was very sad last week because of my bad grade of Syntax. (having bad score on syntax) I just got 66 on my first test. But I have to had to admit that I (I) didn't study hard before the test.
“That’s okay….66 isn’t that bad…I got 52 on my first test! “
2009 Maret 19 19:09
atoenoe mengatakan...
He was not a handsome guy but he (omit ‘he’) quite nice to everyone. He has (was) kind to anybody who needed his help. but (Except) one thing that I hated most of this man (that) he never do (did) his promises to me.
“Try to find other guys…Me… maybe?? Hahaha..”
2009 Maret 19 19:11
lois_kp mengatakan...
Last month, I went to a cafe to have a lunch. I chose (was choosing) one of the menu without looking (looked) at the price. I was surprise when the food came. It was a big portion for at least 3 people! I felt shock (was shocked) and looked at the menu, I found that the price of the food (that) I was asking for was too ( so) expensive for one portion ordinary food like that. Finally, I asked my friends to eat that (the) food with me.
“At least, you didn’t entrust your identity card (KTP) “
2009 Maret 22 20:40
lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was child, I had a bicycle which I loved so much. I went around with my friends with it. One day, I was careless that (so) a motorbike hit me. I fell down and injured. However, I felt so strong after that, because although I had injuries, I didn't cry ( , ) and so my family's doctor told me that I would (will) be a strong girl. Haha.
“Strong like a tiger …I loved it...”
2009 Maret 22 20:40
lois_kp mengatakan...
I've got my lovely celular stolen in some days before Eid Mubarak. ( I lost my lovely cellular several days before Eid Mubarak) I just didn't realize when the thieves stole it. They was getting closer to me and picked my cellular from my pocket. They must try to get close to me in order to pick my cellular out of my wallet) After that, I just felt confused because I (had) saved all of my agenda in my cellular. For some days, I forgot almost all of my appointments and my schedule!
“Wrap your phones using newspaper! The pick pocket won’t be aware since they considered it as tempe… hahaha.”
-Believed me..it works-
2009 Maret 22 20:42
When I was the new (a new) student of SMA 1 Salatiga, there was an event called Marsinal Pra osma. The aim of this event is to introduce the juniors with the seniors. On my first day of MPO, I did mistake. So my senior, Sari, punished me. (I made mistake on my first day of MPO, so my senior Sari punished me) She asked me to find her friend, Bagus and asked him what color of his underwear. Gosh! Should I do that?
Yes, of course.
I haven't known ( I didn’t know )him before. So I started by asking my seniors one by one. Finally, I found him.
Here is (below are) my conversation with him : (in Indonesian)
me :” Mas yang namanya Bagus XII IA 2 ya?”
Bagus :” Iya. Napa?”
me :” warna celana dalemmu sekarang apa mas?”
Bagus :”@!#??%*”
Well, after having 10 minute embarrasing conversation I knew what color of his underwear is... RED! (I finally found that the color of his underwear was red)
“Well, you’re lucky, because Bagus didn’t ask you back about the size of your pants”
2009 Maret 11 06:40
nine mengatakan...
one (One) day my relatives and I went to a cinema in Semarang to watch a movie. After the movie was over, I throw (thrown) my coke can behind (,) without knowing whether there were people behind me (or not). Then, a girl was angry with me because my can hit her and made her clothes wet.
“If I were that girl, I won’t get angry. I just asked you to buy me a new expensive cloth”
2009 Maret 12 01:53
Nine mengatakan...
What is in your mind when you hear "blue film"? when I first heard these words, (when the first time I heard those words) what is in my mind is just (the thing that came on my mind was ) a film with a blue screen. But of course, blue film is not just a blue screen film.
OK, honestly I have never watched a blue film until I was 17 years old. One day, my teacher was coming (came) late to the class. I was sitting at my desk, when one of my friends came and entrusted his mobile phone to me. I opened his mobile phone and I didn't know how, suddenly a porn video appeared on the screen. I was shocked but still continuing watch (to watch) that video. Soon after that, I felt dizzy and I run ( ran) to the toilet, spilled my lunch out.
“Wow… I’m wondering ….errr..hahahaha… nevermind!!
2009 Maret 12 02:00
atoenoe mengatakan...
It was Friday when I found that (a) little cat in (at the) the front of my door. Actually, I didn’t like cat at all (,) but I brought (decided to bring ) it into my house. (Then) I fed it and gave it milk. It kooked (looked) so nice and I started to fall in love with it. Finally, I decided to keep the cat as my first pet.
Eew…That sweet….how’s about an open mouthed crocodile which is laying at the front of your door?
2009 Maret 12 22:37
Atoenoe mengatakan...
When I met him for the first time (when the first time I met him), (soon)I knew it was a big mistake. He entered my class in hurry. He sat down beside me. ( He was sitting next to me, soon after entered the class) He said hello and gave his best smile. But everything was ended when the lecture said, “ Hey, you! Girl in white T-shirt. Please do number one in front of the class.” I was so embarassed. Phew!
Why you felt embarrassed? That was the right time to prove your brain….go keep fighting Tiger…
2009 Maret 12 22:38
atoenoe mengatakan...
That was my MPO ( Marginal Pra Osma) (,) an old welcoming party in my high school. I had to wear many kinds of attribute thet (that)made me look (looked) like a fool. I had to get some signatures from teachers and body student’s committee. I did many things like counting roofs, finding ants, makindg (making) a poem, and proposing a senior student to be my boyfriend. And that was unforgetablr (unforgettable) moment for me. Huf!
HAHAHA…I agree with you… it was a great time to look a new boyfriend/ girlfriend indeed…
2009 Maret 12 22:40
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I have (had) an embarrassing experience when I was in Senior High School. After I had my lunch in canteen , I went back to my class. I was in a rush ( , )so I didn't realize when I got into (entered to) the wrong class. Everybody laughed (was laughing) at me.
“How come? If I were the teacher I’ll kick you out out of the window right away!!”
2009 Maret 12 22:47
blessme_deby mengatakan...
After I finished my class, I went to Mandiri ATM in front of campus. In front of the ATM there was a small clothing shop. I was looking (stared) at that shop without looking (at )my way. as (As) the result, I hit a glass door.
“Debby…you’d better walk carefully next time ….”
2009 Maret 12 22:49
lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was in Junior High School, I hated one of the teacher (teachers) so much. she (She) was very strict and her thin body made her appearance looked even odd. a lot (Lots) of students in my school hated her too. so, (So,) it wasn't a surprise if sometime (sometimes) we heard every student would talk (talked) about her if the subject was "the most cruel teacher".
One day, I was gossipping about her with my classmate in the class after break. We were talking loudly and sometime we were laughing because of the jokes about my teacher. I was talking too and I was the last one who would have chance to spoke about that teacher in class that day... (wordiness) (We were talking loudly and sometimes laughing, because of those jokes about my teacher. I was the last one who would have chance to spoke about that teacher in class that day...)
I said, "I swear. She’s going to the hell for her stupid bones." (what does ‘stupid bones’ mean?)
Then I talked loudly and confidently about her other bad sides (negative sides). I just felt strange because my friends around me just looked at me with their confused and afraid (anxious and frightened) faces without giving responses (any reaction )to my words.
Suddenly, someone behind me pull (pulled) my ear and said coldly, "what are you talking about?"
I was freezing when I realized that it was the voice of my "cruel teacher" (my cruel teacher’s voice )who (whom) was I talked about.
So, (after) that day I spent the rest of (the) my school time in the teacher's office to get my "cruel" punishment. (What kinds of punishment ?)
“I’m sure you’ll be miss that cruel teacher”
2009 Maret 13 05:42
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I was playing with my sister when my dog, Asta bite (bitted) me. painful , (Painful) that(was) what I felt. moreover (Moreover)I should go home with a hole on my pants.( , ) but that (incidence) didn't make me traumatic.
What kind of dog is it?
2009 Maret 14 03:27
Nine mengatakan...
Last week, my father and I went to my father’s friend to give invitation card. My father forgot where the house was because my father ( he) rarely came to his house. With my father (my father’s) instinct, we came to a house. I knocked (I was knocking) on the door but nobody came out. So I decided to slip the invitation card under the door. Then, when my father and I wanted (decided) to go home, my father’s friend came out from (of) his house, which is contiguous with the house that I slip the card into.
“LOL…this I called funny….fluky you.. the house owner didn’t assume you as a debt collector!!”
2009 Maret 17 18:54
nine mengatakan...
When I was typing my paper last Saturday night, there was a sound of my favorite “dog-dog” noodle. I run out (ran) outside to call Mr. Gozali (the name of “dog-dog” noodle seller).
Unfortunately, there was another boy who also wanted to buy the noodle. We argued a little about who called Mr. Gozali first. Finally, I was so lucky that because Mr. Gozali cooked me the noodle first. (Mr. Gozali served up me first)
“How much does mie dog2 cost? You’d Better to treat me sometimes…”
2009 Maret 19 05:06
Nine mengatakan...
It was my first punishment that I got when I was in Junior high school. Because my friends and I were bored with the lesson that my teacher taught, we cut from class by climbing the school wall when the teacher hadn’t come yet. (Bored, me and my friends were settling to skip the class by climbing the school wall when my teacher hadn’t come yet). The next day, my friends and I (me and ny friends) were gathered at schoolyard to yank out weeds growing on the yard.
“Wow…galz!!! You are the truly Rambo….”
Well….uhm….there so many weeds growing thickly over my house …wanna yank them out??
2009 Maret 19 05:07
lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was child, I often heard about the story of falling star. They (they) said that falling star could make people's dreams come true. Of course I believe (believed) that ( , ) although I'd never see that falling star itself. Then, when I was about 14 years old, I had a gathering with my friends that (and) we shall having (had to) sleep outdoor. We were talking (talked) about many things and joking (joked) along that night. At 3 am, some of my friends have (had) fallen asleep and some of (the rest of )us were still chatting. Because of feeling tired (tired), I was lying beside my friends and facing the dark sky. That was a great starry night. I was just staring at the stars and I was almost falling (almost fell) asleep when suddenly I saw a falling star! Spontaneously, I shouted to my friends who were still cahatting (chatting), "Hey! Falling star!" Then my friend told me that I shall make a wish at that time and so I did. After that, I couldn't sleep until 6am, because I was amazed by 3 beautiful falling stars that I would (will) never forget. The blue star, Orange star, and Bright star..
“Does your wish come true?”
2009 Maret 19 05:15
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I can’t forget this incident. When I was a child ( , )I like playing on the porch. One day, I was squeezed between fences. I got stuck for about 2 hours until my parent came (out ) from their office and set me free from (between) fences.
“Debby…what would happen if yours parent didn’t show up ….”
2009 Maret 19 18:30
blessme_deby mengatakan...
My friends and I like (liked to) squatting (hang out) in mall. After (I) we finished eating, I wanted to pay the bill. Unfortunately, I couldn’t find my wallet. I was (became) a victim of pick pocketing!
“Are you familiar with a small things called credit card?”
2009 Maret 19 18:30
blessme_deby mengatakan...
Yesterday, I accompanied my brother and his friends from Bali who wanted to hunt places for their photograph. At 4 a.m ( , ) we went to Rawa Pening to catch the sunrise. The sunrise was so wonderful! I bet that you will adore the sunrise at Rawa Pening.
“What a good job to promote our local tourist resort” “ whoahh..you’re truly nature lover”
Next destination…..”kopeng”..hehehe
2009 Maret 19 18:31
atoenoe mengatakan...
my boyfriend and I were going to find a quite place for cooling down our mind. We found a place which has a lot of rubber trees beside the town. (Me and my boyfriend were going to find a quite place for cooling down our mind when we finally found a place which has a lot of rubber trees beside the town) We sat there and started to talk about small stuff (things) there. I asked him to carry me on his back for a walk because I enjoyed lying on his back much. We stayed there for about 3 hours then he took me back home.
Hohohoho…..passionate hours, huh!
2009 Maret 19 19:07
atoenoe mengatakan...
I was very sad last week because of my bad grade of Syntax. (having bad score on syntax) I just got 66 on my first test. But I have to had to admit that I (I) didn't study hard before the test.
“That’s okay….66 isn’t that bad…I got 52 on my first test! “
2009 Maret 19 19:09
atoenoe mengatakan...
He was not a handsome guy but he (omit ‘he’) quite nice to everyone. He has (was) kind to anybody who needed his help. but (Except) one thing that I hated most of this man (that) he never do (did) his promises to me.
“Try to find other guys…Me… maybe?? Hahaha..”
2009 Maret 19 19:11
lois_kp mengatakan...
Last month, I went to a cafe to have a lunch. I chose (was choosing) one of the menu without looking (looked) at the price. I was surprise when the food came. It was a big portion for at least 3 people! I felt shock (was shocked) and looked at the menu, I found that the price of the food (that) I was asking for was too ( so) expensive for one portion ordinary food like that. Finally, I asked my friends to eat that (the) food with me.
“At least, you didn’t entrust your identity card (KTP) “
2009 Maret 22 20:40
lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was child, I had a bicycle which I loved so much. I went around with my friends with it. One day, I was careless that (so) a motorbike hit me. I fell down and injured. However, I felt so strong after that, because although I had injuries, I didn't cry ( , ) and so my family's doctor told me that I would (will) be a strong girl. Haha.
“Strong like a tiger …I loved it...”
2009 Maret 22 20:40
lois_kp mengatakan...
I've got my lovely celular stolen in some days before Eid Mubarak. ( I lost my lovely cellular several days before Eid Mubarak) I just didn't realize when the thieves stole it. They was getting closer to me and picked my cellular from my pocket. They must try to get close to me in order to pick my cellular out of my wallet) After that, I just felt confused because I (had) saved all of my agenda in my cellular. For some days, I forgot almost all of my appointments and my schedule!
“Wrap your phones using newspaper! The pick pocket won’t be aware since they considered it as tempe… hahaha.”
-Believed me..it works-
2009 Maret 22 20:42
Jumat, 27 Februari 2009
assignment
nah.. temen-temen terima kasih telah mengunjungi blog saya yg sangat simple tapi akan sangat bermanfaat kelak ..hopefully.
apa yg harus saya kerjakan??
nah..apa yg harus dikerjakan sangatlah simple a.k.a sederhana temen-temen.
bikinlah tulisan past narratives ( past experience) 3 times a week and post your writing in my blog (ed-indrablog.blogspot.com)
ok. if u have any question, let me know!
apa yg harus saya kerjakan??
nah..apa yg harus dikerjakan sangatlah simple a.k.a sederhana temen-temen.
bikinlah tulisan past narratives ( past experience) 3 times a week and post your writing in my blog (ed-indrablog.blogspot.com)
ok. if u have any question, let me know!
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