revision and comment part 2

atoenoe mengatakan...
It was 11 p.m. I couldn't sleep that night, so I sent sms to my boyfriend. We discussed everything about our relationship but we came to the main point. He left me. He decided to leave me and asked me to forget everything. I said nothing. I felt asleep. In the morning, I read the messages again. I thought hardly (I still could’t believe it) and then I cried all the morning.
Ewwww…sad story part 1..
2009 Maret 25 05:22

atoenoe mengatakan...
He didn't reply my message eventhough I tried it many times. I missed him very much. But it was impossible to meet him. He didn't want to hurt me anymore by stopping contact me. I can't (couldn’t) believe it.
Ewwww…sad story part 2…
2009 Maret 25 05:24

atoenoe mengatakan...
"I knocked (at) your door but there was no answer. I called your mobile phone, there was no answer too. I sent you sms, you didn't reply it. Then, I decided to not (decided not to ) disturb you anymore. I love you. Goodbye."
Again… sad story part 3…
..so hurt so much pain….
2009 Maret 25 05:30

nine mengatakan...
When I went to ATM last week, I shocked ( I was shock) because I found that my balance was still in the same amount as last month. There must have been some amount of money came into my account because of a business that I ran. I asked my niece, who had a business with me, about the money. She told me that she had transferred the money to my account, but when I printed out my account at Mandiri Bank, there was no a transfer from any bank. I asked her, but she answered nothing. I waited (I’d been waiting) for her confirm to me, but until yesterday she didn’t come to my house or (nor) even called me. I was really disappointed at her. Not for the money (not because of the money) , but for my trust of her that she misused.
Try find a lawyer… you have to sue her/him!!!
2009 Maret 26 05:25

nine mengatakan...
I couldn’t sleep at that night. (so)I went to living room to watch TV. I turned on the TV and searched for a good movie. I watched Trans TV and found a horror movie so I changed to another channel. I watched RCTI, but still found a horror movie. Then, I watched ANTV and still, found a horror movie. I decided to go back to my room to turn on my computer, but when I stood up to went (go) back to my room, the electricity went out. Then I realized that it (day) was “Malam Jumat Kliwon.”
Hohoho…don’t be a coward!!
2009 Maret 26 05:27

nine mengatakan...
I was 10 years old when I walked from SD Laboratorium Salatiga to my house at Dliko Indah Street at that day. It was sunny day, and I should ( I had to) walk alone because my father didn’t pick me up and I ran out for (of) money. After I arrived at my house, I was so unlucky because my parents and my sister hadn’t come yet and I didn’t bring a key. Finally, after waited for an hour, my parents came and saved me from dehydration.
Yeah… same story also happened to me.
2009 Maret 26 05:29

blessme_deby mengatakan...
I was so panic (I was panic) that day. I couldn’t find my self-phone everywhere (anywhere); in my pocket, my bag, or even Innes’ bag. (so) I ran to Rindang where I last went there. Thanks God, I found my self-phone. Carelessly, I left out my self-phone there.
Well…I don’t surprised!! Hahahahaha
Sanguine people always do this!!
2009 Maret 26 05:37

blessme_deby mengatakan...
It was 11p.m (22 p.m.). when I arrived at Lawang Sewu Semarang. After hunting for photography, my brother, his friends and I decided to go to Lawang Sewu. They came from Bali, so they were curious about Lawang Sewu. I was the only girl at that time. Actually I saw nothing spooky, my brother and his friends also didn’t catch any oddity on their camera, but some man from IBL, who also joined with our team, was being followed by a girl, who “lives” in Lawang Sewu.
Hmm…..maybe she wants signature!!
2009 Maret 26 05:38
blessme_deby mengatakan...
I had a prom night in Puncak with my friends in SMA Marsudirirni Bekasi. I came late at that time because my friends asked me to put make up on them. But, surprisingly, I became Queen for the prom night with my boyfriend, Kadek, as the King.
Yadaa…wkwkwkwk
2009 Maret 26 05:40
lois_kp mengatakan...
When my youngest brother was in elementary school, my mother picked him up everyday after school. One day, my mother was away, so my brother called pedicab ( pedicab’ driver) to go home. After they arrived in front of my house, my brother came in to our house immediately. Then, he ate( he had lunch) and went to bed. Some hours after that, there was a knock on my house’s front door. So I went out to see who was knocking the door. I felt surprised when I knew who was in front of the door. That was the pedicab’ driver! He said that my brother didn’t pay him yet and had been waiting for hours. Finally, I apologized to him and paid him.
Hahaha…how poor is he.. I granted lots sympathy for his passionate.
2009 Maret 28 04:59
lois_kp mengatakan...
I love chocolate so much! My friends knew that and when I celebrated my 15th birthday, they gave me a box full of my favorite chocolate bars (a full box of my favorites chocolate). They challenged me to eat all of those 12 chocolate bars in 30 minutes. If I could do that, they promised me to buy me free chocolates for one month. So I did! My friends were amazed and then laughed. Although I vomited after some minutes because of those chocolates, they kept their promise and bought me a lot of chocolate bars for one month.
mmm…Yummy…..tummy….fatty…wkwkwk
2009 Maret 28 05:00

lois_kp mengatakan...
Last Saturday, I visited Andre, my friend ( I visited my friend, Andre) in Solo with my brother. Before we went in to Andre’s house, my brother and I sat on infield ( what does it mean? A field?) ) in front of Andre’s house. My brother put his cell-phone on it beside us. Then, we came in to the house, had dinner, played games, and talked about many things for hours. Suddenly, my brother said that he couldn’t find his cell-phone. We were confused and looked for his cell-phone around the house. Finally, he got out and found it on infield! We were so grateful because none found and stole it!
Again!! Cell phones became a popular topic to post!!
2009 Maret 28 05:02

lois_kp mengatakan...
When I was in senior high school, I often skipped the class with my classmates. Like one day when I skipped Math’ class and went to canteen with my 9 classmates. Suddenly, we met with the strictest teacher in the canteen. Furiously, he commanded (asked) us to go back to our class. Then we went away from the canteen but of course we didn’t go back to the class! We watched the basketball match, ate in the food court, and we really had a good time. Because of that, all of us got into trouble with the headmaster and we shall make a “surat pernyataan” which our parents must sign it (which had to be sign by our parents). That was so silly, but we were really enjoyed the “skip-class” part. Of course that (those) punishment didn’t make us stopped (to stop) skipping the class!
Such disobedient students!! Yet, you have a story to remember.
2009 Maret 28 05:03

lois_kp mengatakan...
Last year, I was shopping in a mall with my friend (this is not a sentences). Then we came in to an accessories’ Stan (store). There were a lot of cute dolls here. I stared at one of the cutest doll. There was a button in the middle of its stomach-part. Because of my curiosity, I pushed it. Then suddenly there were noisy sounds from the doll. Everybody looked at me and the doll because the Stan (store) was crowd of customer but they were very quiet and didn’t make noisy sound. I was very ashamed, so I walked to the other part of the shop and pretended as if I had never touched the doll.
LOL….hahahaha... this is really hilarious!! Truly I loved it
2009 Maret 28 05:04